Thursday, October 24, 2013

 Description of the day:
Today in class we got a little bit more into the Soweto Uprising and we also got to know why the Soweto Uprising happened. We also had time to improve our poplet adding the information from the packet we read. We also learned the reasons why many people were shot in the Soweto Uprising and they were mostly children.








6 comments:

  1. Thomas I think your chose with the picture was very good. But you don't need to put the picture Purpose two times. I liked how you put the summary on top but I think that it needs to be more longer because that doesn't give me all the information that we did for today. Keep up the good work!

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  2. Thomas, I think that you have to many pictures that do not show what happened in the lesson about the Soweto uprising.You need to show what had happened from the packet to show in pictures and in words to help people who didn't do the lesson understand better.

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  3. I think all the pictures are good, but you need to add a lot more writing. You barely showed what the class did and you did not explain the Soweto Uprising that much. People who don't know about what we did in class will have no clue about anything. Your last post was much better.

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  4. Thomas, liked how you really put a lot of pictures. You did a really good job at that. Just one thing- I think you should follow Jack M.'s post, like writing between the photos, not only an overview of the day. Or else, you did well on the post!

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  5. Thomas, I really liked how many pictures you added. But I think that you could have added a lot more about what we did in class. I think that you barely explained what happened in class today. I think you did well on your photos. But add an explanation about what happened in class. I think you did much better on the post before.

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  6. I think you should say more things about the Soweto Uprising and what happened in it, how it happened and where it happened. You should be more specific about what you are saying and give people more info. on what happened on that day of the Soweto Uprising. Maybe tell them people one of the things you heard while we watched on the video today, and what the sister of one of the people who was killed said in it. Your blog post was really good but It needs improving.

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